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A Sea of Lights

Looking down over a sea of lights,

I find your face in every flame,

And the voices rise above

In perfect harmony

With the echo of my heartbeat.

Looking down over a darkened crowd,

I feel your presence in every shadow,

And in every silhouette

That stood in truthful silence

Upon the field of green.

Looking down over a wave of tears,

I know the sorrow carried in every soul,

For theirs is all my own,

But it does not match the magnitude

That my heart will feel forever.

Looking down over all the people we used to know,

The ones that helped us along the way,

And suffered our ups and downs as we did,

I found I could not change their pain,

Or ease the grief in my own mind.

But looking down upon the sea of lights,

I know that you are here even if you are not,

And that the pieces of me that only fit to you

Will once again be whole someday,

When I meet you in the heavens.
©2007-2009 ~thought-fox
:iconthought-fox:

Author's Comments

This is an old poem, but I've always really liked it. this was written almost 2 years ago, inspired by a great night.

make of it what you will.

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:icongartenian-assassin:
I lvoe the flow of this...it makes you think of an actual sea, with it's up and downs in rhythem...it's a wonderful peice!

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"Briarwood is the pretty poison. There's no cure for Briarwood."
:iconmegami-kun:
i agree. it is a really good piece of free verse poetry. you have a real knack for it, i've noticed. lovely imagery and meaning.

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"Does the walker choose the path or the path the walker?"~Garth Nix, Abhorsen Trilogy

"All I know is that I jump when I'm told and I have no free time."~Alanna, by Tamora Pierce
:iconthought-fox:
thank you mah dear husband *petpet*
:iconmegami-kun:
you are quite welcome dear "wife" *glomps*

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"Does the walker choose the path or the path the walker?"~Garth Nix, Abhorsen Trilogy

"All I know is that I jump when I'm told and I have no free time."~Alanna, by Tamora Pierce

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