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Your smiles prickle with wickedness,
The thorns on the rose of a lost love,
The dew drops on your web of lies.
And your eyes shine with the innocence
Of a small child, standing above
A hill of ants, a spying glass in hand.
Your skin glows in the dark
Of the night, and that’s when I see
Your true form, beneath the mask.
Underneath the willow tree you lie asleep,
In the warmth of your arms
My heart grows,
Watered day and night with my tears,
The liquid blood I cry for you,
Drips crimson from my face, the petals,
And race down to the ground
Where I soak it all back in through the roots
Of how we started out, and since the beginning
I knew who you were, but I chose to ignore
And brought you here to my garden of heart,
Where I thought I could teach you to love.
©2007-2009 ~thought-fox
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another old poem. I just felt like posting something.

writing © me

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:iconstriped-candycane:
Love it...the symbols and the imaginary are just perfect. Favorite verses:
"My heart grows,
Watered day and night with my tears”

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"Do cats eat bats?[...]Do bats eat cats?"

- Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, by Lewis Carroll
:iconinsaneblondemidget14:
wow that is so deep my love. I really like it! It makes you imagine what is going on in each stanza and the emotion behind it is fabulous!

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=Jaz-is-rad and*insaneblondemidget14 4evuh x3
Yaoi isn't about two boys making passionate love in a dark corridor, no it's so much more than that, but I'll tell you after I finish watching
:iconthought-fox:
aw, thank you. I'm glad you like it <3
:iconmegami-kun:
my GOD yer good with imagery...better than me, that's for sure. my poetry is usually too straight forward.

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"Does the walker choose the path or the path the walker?"~Garth Nix, Abhorsen Trilogy

"All I know is that I jump when I'm told and I have no free time."~Alanna, by Tamora Pierce
:iconthought-fox:
mm..I like imagery...but this is about as straight forward as it gets with me. ...its all very confusing
:iconmegami-kun:
that is O K! it's kinda fun figuring out the meaning of poems (except for the ones they make us read in school...sheer boredom for me)

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"Does the walker choose the path or the path the walker?"~Garth Nix, Abhorsen Trilogy

"All I know is that I jump when I'm told and I have no free time."~Alanna, by Tamora Pierce

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